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This book should have been 1/4 of its actual length. It meanders for nearly the entire thing and follows several unrelated plots. I think the story would have been much better if it just followed Mattimeo, but instead we have to read about all the folks at Redwall doing shenanigans with a random villain that shows up halfway through the book. Which is a shame because the primary villain of the book is an interesting one and all the side plots really take away from the main story. I’m also disappointed with the character development. Halfway through, it was heavy handed, which is expected for a kids book. But we never get to see Mattimeo actually step up and lead or fight. He just gets a steel resolve and then gets rescued by others. I think it would have been a lot more meaningful if we could have seen him stand up to the villains at the end or be the one to inspire a rebellion. Instead we get many many pages of a baby causing chaos in Redwall. This is one of those books that follows multiple plots and only one of them is interesting so you dread reading half of it. And a lot of the problems the characters encounter seem manufactured to take up space and do not add anything interesting for the plot or the character development.