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If the author wasn't long departed, she would have to be cited for severe abuse of exclamation points and abuse of question marks. I never saw such terrible use of punctuation in my life. The book isn't particularly charming or memorable; it's trying hard to ape the style of Louisa May Alcott, one of the most popular authors of the late 1800s in the US, and it fails badly. None of the characters have Alcott's charm and believability and the plot meanders along without much purpose. I know the story was originally serialized in a magazine, but so was Dickens and his stories have a point by the end. I wonder if the characters would have seemed a little less annoying if everyone wasn't shouting all the time. How else are you supposed to read a story where nearly every sentence ends in an exclamation point? Even the narration shouts! Now I'm doing it!