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I wondered whether this was a memoir disguised as a murder mystery, or a memoir injected with a murder mystery in order to hold our interest through 800 plus pages. And yet the murder had to be the pivotal event around which all the other themes hung, and so I concluded that this book could have been halved in size and resulted in a much more impactful novel.
Based on the Steven Truscott case in Canada, the author weaves the events surrounding the real-life murder of a 12 year old girl in 1959 into her fictional story set in 1963 in a similar armed forces base near London, Ontario.
Much of the novel focuses on life in the 1960’s in the military, and this is where the memoir aspect comes in, for the author too was raised on a military base around that period. The minutia of daily life replete with barbecues, picnics, schoolyard banter and family dinners are covered in excruciating and often repetitious detail. During this time men worked and women stayed home to raise families. The fundamental issue concerning everyone is the Bomb and its threat of nuclear war. Two story lines weave in and out of each other: the adult story of Jack McCarthy, newly posted to Canadian Air Force Base Centralia, and the child story of his daughter Madeleine who has to face the predators lurking in the adult world. Jack is a decorated airman who never saw combat in WWII and who is chafing under the fact that he was cashiered out due to an accident on the eve of going to the battle front. Madeleine is trying hard to understand adults like her teacher Mr. March who gets her to do “exercises’ after school, exercises that include fondling and strangling certain intimate body parts. Other subplots and characters are woven in: a defector from the Soviet Union who was part of the V2 rocket program during WWII and who provides an opportunity for Jack to do something meaningful for his country; a refugee from the same program and his family of adopted Metis kids now living on the base; and the lives of the inhabitants of the PMQs (Permanent Married Quarters), not always harmonious despite the all-expenses-paid lifestyles they have.
When the murder of the 12 year-old Claire, Madeleine’s classmate, takes place in the vicinity of the base, the lives of this close-knit group are thrown into chaos with the fallout taking many generations to heal. Fifteen-year-old Ricky Froelich, son of the refugee, is arrested and charged with the murder; his father mysteriously vanishes; Madeleine becomes a key witness and is forced to confront what telling the truth, the whole truth and nothing but the truth is all about; and Jack is faced with a concealing a secret to support the greater good. Justice is miscarried in the interest of expediency. Years later Madeleine and Jack are still dealing with trying to reconcile the murder- she through therapy and he through multiple heart attacks. In the end, with a brilliant plot twist we discover whodunit.
Several points are made in the novel:
a) In life, often the guilty escape while the innocent are punished
b) Childhood is a scary time
c) Children can commit evil if conditioned by adults
d) The price of suppression is the breakdown of health
e) Sexual abuse destroys and distorts lives forever
f) Canada may have been the destination of the Underground Railway for runaway US slaves in the 19th century but it was also the starting point of another Underground Railway for eastern bloc defectors going the other way.
Given the political and social backdrop that this story plays out against, the authorial voice intrudes constantly making comments, observations and explanations that could have been excised to let the events speak for themselves. There is a also a great deal of repetition of quotidian events that does nothing to advance the story and maintain narrative thrust, and this is annoying.
After reading MacDonald’s first novel Fall on Your Knees and the blurbs on this her second novel, I was expecting an engaging thrill-ride. Instead I found a good book burdened with excessive writing, whose editor had taken a back seat in light of the fame the author had received from her debut.
Based on the Steven Truscott case in Canada, the author weaves the events surrounding the real-life murder of a 12 year old girl in 1959 into her fictional story set in 1963 in a similar armed forces base near London, Ontario.
Much of the novel focuses on life in the 1960’s in the military, and this is where the memoir aspect comes in, for the author too was raised on a military base around that period. The minutia of daily life replete with barbecues, picnics, schoolyard banter and family dinners are covered in excruciating and often repetitious detail. During this time men worked and women stayed home to raise families. The fundamental issue concerning everyone is the Bomb and its threat of nuclear war. Two story lines weave in and out of each other: the adult story of Jack McCarthy, newly posted to Canadian Air Force Base Centralia, and the child story of his daughter Madeleine who has to face the predators lurking in the adult world. Jack is a decorated airman who never saw combat in WWII and who is chafing under the fact that he was cashiered out due to an accident on the eve of going to the battle front. Madeleine is trying hard to understand adults like her teacher Mr. March who gets her to do “exercises’ after school, exercises that include fondling and strangling certain intimate body parts. Other subplots and characters are woven in: a defector from the Soviet Union who was part of the V2 rocket program during WWII and who provides an opportunity for Jack to do something meaningful for his country; a refugee from the same program and his family of adopted Metis kids now living on the base; and the lives of the inhabitants of the PMQs (Permanent Married Quarters), not always harmonious despite the all-expenses-paid lifestyles they have.
When the murder of the 12 year-old Claire, Madeleine’s classmate, takes place in the vicinity of the base, the lives of this close-knit group are thrown into chaos with the fallout taking many generations to heal. Fifteen-year-old Ricky Froelich, son of the refugee, is arrested and charged with the murder; his father mysteriously vanishes; Madeleine becomes a key witness and is forced to confront what telling the truth, the whole truth and nothing but the truth is all about; and Jack is faced with a concealing a secret to support the greater good. Justice is miscarried in the interest of expediency. Years later Madeleine and Jack are still dealing with trying to reconcile the murder- she through therapy and he through multiple heart attacks. In the end, with a brilliant plot twist we discover whodunit.
Several points are made in the novel:
a) In life, often the guilty escape while the innocent are punished
b) Childhood is a scary time
c) Children can commit evil if conditioned by adults
d) The price of suppression is the breakdown of health
e) Sexual abuse destroys and distorts lives forever
f) Canada may have been the destination of the Underground Railway for runaway US slaves in the 19th century but it was also the starting point of another Underground Railway for eastern bloc defectors going the other way.
Given the political and social backdrop that this story plays out against, the authorial voice intrudes constantly making comments, observations and explanations that could have been excised to let the events speak for themselves. There is a also a great deal of repetition of quotidian events that does nothing to advance the story and maintain narrative thrust, and this is annoying.
After reading MacDonald’s first novel Fall on Your Knees and the blurbs on this her second novel, I was expecting an engaging thrill-ride. Instead I found a good book burdened with excessive writing, whose editor had taken a back seat in light of the fame the author had received from her debut.