Now onto this book. It is written by a white man about a black woman and I found it racist and patronising. The story is too simple. The crimes are too too easy. Maybe he was targeting a younger audience.He knew that this book was going to be read by many Motswanas, so I believe he picked his words a little too carefully because he tried too hard not to sound racist. Compromising the pace of story (which was slow) and he took a very weak plot.. in the end he still sounded racist.. ie his efforts were pointless.. here are some points why:
1. He wanted this book to introduce people to Botswana to its culture. Like a tourist pamphlet in a novel. Sadly the geographical information was highly inaccurate. If she had an office at the foot of Kgale Hill, she would not have had a view of the Kalahari, but instead she would have had a beautiful view of the Mokolodi Game reserve. The desert in fact is no where near Gaborone. The truth of Botswana is equally beautiful so why make these lies to sell the country more? This can only be done by a person who thinks that Botswana as it is, is not enough so lets move places around hoping it would make the country sound interesting.
2. "There must be many women driving around the town in their husbands stolen cars.." This is the most stupidest thing ever said by the author and not at all true. Is he saying the main way that blacks can have cars is if they steal them? Racist much?
3. " Every so often you met a white person who understood, who realised how things really were, but these people were few and the other white people often treated them with suspicion." This is pretentious shit..
4. He mentioned a lot of the dry Botswana beauty. But so many times he sounded like he was trying to convince himself of it.
He wrote stating that he loves Botswana and the ‘blacks’. Yet when he dedicated this book at the beginning, not a single person was black or staying in Botswana. Irony?
I can see something ugly underneath his words. And I dont like it. Its commercial fiction aimed at pleasing the black race written by a white guy. He tried hard not to sound racist. And he failed. This is just my opinion.