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Tis the Age when Reason's casts long shadows over Terra Ignota and illuminates Terra Nostra, two Astronomers—Mason, the Melancholic Stargazer, and Dixon, the pragmatic Surveyor—embarked upon a Commission most Peculiar: to carve a Line straight as Euclid’s Dream through the Howling Wilderness of the New World. So begins Mason & Dixon, a Tale spun not merely of Ink and Quill, but of the spectral Threads that bind Comedy to Tragedy, Science to Sorcery, and History to the Whims of those who Scribble it. A Postmodern Tour de France.
Introduction
I hoped you liked my poor imitation of the book's style, if not, fear not, as that will be the only time it will be done. So yeah, what can you say? We go from observing the Transit of Venus, creating the Mason–Dixon Line that will serve also as the official separating incision between North and South during the Civil War and represents so much more (as the book makes you question). An Odyssey, traversing through most of the United States, and a Don Quixote-esque narrative on top of it. Where Miguel de Cervantes lampooned the myth of chivalry, this novel explores the origin of America, which modern America was birthed in Philadelphia, 1786, a few months before the U.S. Constitution was approved, likewise where our story begins, and yes—it’s a Christmas story!
Broad Overview
Truthfully, writing a review for this novel is quite daunting as what can be expressed? I’m unsure, I feel sort of speechless by the journey I undertook. I experienced so much yet barely grasped the surface yet remained enraptured by it from beginning to end. Nevertheless, it’s one of the most perfect books ever constructed. It’s not my favourite of all time (though one of my favourites) nor the best book of all time (a claim like that feels too subjective) nevertheless, it’s a masterpiece. The more you reflect upon the book, the more impressive and thought-provoking it ends up becoming (the tragedy and comedy heightens in reflection); it’s one of those achievements that feels like it can only be attained by a lifetime of work, and you will be remembered by the books (and apparently he has two more that are critically beloved, if not more), like David Foster Wallace's Infinite Jest, James Joyce's Ulysses, Mervyn Peake's Gormenghast trilogy, or J.R.R. Tolkien's Lord of the Rings. Before even beginning the review properly, I will state, this is my first Thomas Pynchon novel. I read this first because I saw a video stating a guide to get into all his books, and one interesting thought experiment the individual made was reading his novels chronologically as he outlines the history of America from its origins to 9/11. It sounded like an amazing prospect, so I decided to undertake that path.
Writing Style and Broad Musings
The writing style can be very overwhelming. It uses complex 18th-century vernacular emulating the style of the time. It does take some time to adjust, but then slowly, once you adjust to it, you can’t help finding the writing both funnier and sadder and carrying so much weight at the same time. One passage of many would be this one:
In particular, those descriptions and manner of speech. Especially the conversation of Mason & Dixon, but even beyond them, a lot of the side casts.
In terms of a random footnote I found on the web that may be true or not, apparently at one point it was so authentic there were discussions by the MLA (Modern Language Association) considering the book to be an 18th-century novel. Obviously, it’s false, especially with how it’s only a tale that can be told from a modern perspective, especially with its post-modern musings throughout the entire body of text. True or not, it’s just so authentic that you will believe it.
I will discuss the themes shortly (too much to properly extrapolate), but fundamentally the book is a Christmas story, and one told to children who are up past their bedtime. Despite the many allusions that were lost on me, something did click subconsciously, which I can’t properly articulate, but overall, it is just excellent storytelling. It’s an epic, not just with the rich lives and personalities of our protagonist, but it is also a history of the individuals who aren’t a part of the history books, the unspoken voice. The voices that aren’t preserved in our history books remain as echoes, but we can extrapolate the missing link. It’s an unreliable history, as Rev. Well, was a rebellious figure:
With the Rev’s personal history, speaking against what he views as injustice and not personally witnessing a lot of the events that unfolded, how much can be true? Is it a good debate? Does it simply miss the point? Did our chief protagonists really experience everything that is relayed? Is some of the text not told by Rev, but secretly by TP to us with certain interjections? There obviously has to be an important reason from a thematic purpose why the tale is told to children (future generation), to young adults, and to older adults. How the framing device that isn’t just this one and very free-flowing, it speaks on the study of historiography. It’s a warm novel with very rich characters who grow and reevaluate themselves along the journey, and it’s a pleasure to read.
Themes
History, Historiography and The Purpose?
Following up my point from before, how history is conveyed is a very important theme. Cherrycoke aptly describes it in this passage:
TP is showing his admiration of historians and the difficult tasks they must do. Facts for lawyers can bend the truth for their strategic purposes rather than the pursuit of the whole truth (which is tough with the missing pieces of history). It's the in-between state of chronoloy (factual) and remembrance (interpersonal), providing interpretation as one of a detective or journalist and overall context. Taking jumbled pieces and creating coherency from something that is messy. As he notes, history isn't just listing out facts (as it is often taught in school badly). Not a single chain, as the job of a historian is navigating the truths of even texts that can be deemed mostly false. It's the pursuit to preserve the past for future generations. Creating overall coherence while acknowledging the complexity and ambiguity.
What I found really fascinating about the history is how TP compiles it all together (especially the relationship to time and space). Interestingly, I was reading The Wager by David Grann, a nonfiction book taking place in the same century with a modern perspective as Mason and Dixon. There’s one line that stands very true:
TP is very fascinated in illuminating what might have been with those pages torn out. As the foundation of modern America was built upon Enlightenment thought, a certain individual also rose to prominence: Edward Gibbon, whose styled “history” came to be synonymous with strictly chronological “grand narrative”. The book pretty much attacks that notion of history, as Alexei Lalo states in his article Bely and Pynchon, “that the Enlightenment hope for overall rationalization via simplistic classifications and drawing arbitrary lines and false boundaries has proved counterproductive” thus creating a counter-Enlightenment narratology to comment on the political and cultural biases that motivated calendar “correction” and the Mason-Dixon Line, then and how the anachronism is a critique of rationalism (pg. 11 Multiple Worlds of Pynchon's Mason & Dixon). Genuinely, it’s all a massive rabbit hole, and yeah, you can’t help but be awed by the genius in reflection.
Time
While history and slavery are fundamental themes one can gather immediately, it’s all in context with Time as a construction. For an era that was built on progress through Reason, the amount of myth and folklore is quite a good contrast. At a certain point, time stops being simply linear but highlights the cyclical or mythical nature of it. This all comes to a conclusion, well, everything in the novel, from characters and all its central themes, reaches its finality at the end of Part 2.
The surveyors’ Line, meant to settle a border dispute, becomes a harbinger of violence and exploitation, suggesting that “progress” often resurrects old evils in new forms. Even the novel’s language—written in 18th-century pastiche but peppered with postmodern irony—collapses timelines, drawing parallels between colonial expansion and modern globalisation. Pynchon hints that time is less a line than a spiral, looping back to confront us with unresolved sins.
Another very important point is those missing 11 days. The British Empire for a long time was on the Julian calendar, but one year they decided to switch to the Gregorian calendar, and they decided to skip 11 days to align with it. If you are observing as a human construct, it hasn’t disappeared the same has simply changed; the phenomena have remained constant. There’s a deep discussion about time being stolen, not only their pursuing their imperialistic empire they are conducting this action. The book makes you question institutional structures of power and authorises time itself to a host of people. Mason is very cautious about it; he can’t simply accept that fact, so he creates an idea that time is looping all around him. It’s sort of a spiritual awakening, and those missing 11 days and time digressions are uttered everywhere in the novel.
Slavery, Colonialism and Native American Exploitation
One undeniable theme of the novel is the horrors of slavery. How America, as you know, was shaped by their blood and sweat. While there are moments of condemnation, discussions of complicity, the chains of human civilisation, which is continuously investigated and commented upon in the entire novel, TP is less interested in the reader (if they happen to be American though this isn't an America only issue) feeling bad about the past, it’s more so an investigation: how did we get here? It’s an ontological question of what the secret power structures and forces are undergirding what we are today.
There are so many quotes about slavery that were so poignant and depressing; one such quote is Johanna and her senior slave in Cape Town:
In a nutshell, it’s the correlation of colonialism, slavery, and, well, genocide to unbridled capitalism. It can be viewed as a commentary on how we are enslaved to our past. How those invisible voices still contain mass and are able to break the chains. While we still succumb to our own hubris, certain individuals learns the wrong lesson from history, progress is still being made. This one sequence in the Dutch colonies is a microcosm of the big at large about slavery. It’s brought up time and time again, and in America particularly so with the Native Americans. Moments of the book in association with Natives made me so profoundly sad and moved. Certain monologues, especially near the end, gave such insight it’s difficult to describe.
Comedy and Tragedy
Describing humour is simply missing the point, so I won’t describe it but point out it was wonderful. The book has a wide range of lowbrow and highbrow humour, it’s genuinely fun to read. Some of the more fantastical aspects were a delight. It’s surprising how some of the more absurd aspects can slowly become one of the profound moments of the book, but what’s even more interesting is how much it’s derived from some truth twisted in a unique way. Combining that comedy and tragedy becoming so ubiquitous with each other, like it’s often highlighted in Don Quixote.
Characters
I won’t go too in-depth, but I have to say it’s fantastic across the board. The MVP to me was Dixon, I don’t think that’s a surprise, as his ideals are more aligned to mine, and seeing his worldview fundamentally shift over the course of years is brilliant. Mason is also wonderful; it’s the relationship of these two gentlemen that makes everything come together so organically. There are many other characters who are rich and full of life; Pynchon makes the 18th century feel so alive from the incredible atmosphere and depiction of regular folks (the folks who don’t have a voice in history). I loved Cherry Coke, his family musings, and even the historical figures that have time to shine.
Conclusion
There is a lot more that can be said, but that’s all I feel comfortable in writing. I will just note two things: firstly, the ending is just brilliant in every sense and really heightens everything that came before. It’s one of those books that just keeps on giving. In my review, I didn’t mention Cape Town, St. Helena, and America as characters; I just like to mention they were characters with how TP wrote them. I don’t know TP personally, but the book genuinely felt like the author was coming to terms with America’s colonial past. How can a country proudly profess freedom, yet it’s built upon the blood of slaves? How can you reconcile this contradiction? I believe TP did a brilliant job of conveying America’s sin yet showcasing its beauty at the same time (his love for his homeland). It’s a warm novel, and he handles it tastefully. In conclusion, I’ve devoted months reading it, and it was absolutely worth it, and I’m excited to reread it in the future.
9.5/10
Introduction
I hoped you liked my poor imitation of the book's style, if not, fear not, as that will be the only time it will be done. So yeah, what can you say? We go from observing the Transit of Venus, creating the Mason–Dixon Line that will serve also as the official separating incision between North and South during the Civil War and represents so much more (as the book makes you question). An Odyssey, traversing through most of the United States, and a Don Quixote-esque narrative on top of it. Where Miguel de Cervantes lampooned the myth of chivalry, this novel explores the origin of America, which modern America was birthed in Philadelphia, 1786, a few months before the U.S. Constitution was approved, likewise where our story begins, and yes—it’s a Christmas story!
Snow-Balls have flown their Arcs, starred the Sides of Outbuildings, as of Cousins, carried Hats away into the brisk Wind off Delaware,— the Sleds are brought in and their Runners carefully dried and greased, shoes deposited in the back Hall, a stockinged-foot Descent made upon the great Kitchen, in a purposeful Dither since Morning, punctuated by the ringing Lids of various Boilers and Stewing-Pots, fragrant with Pie-Spices, peeled Fruits, Suet, heated Sugar,— the Children, having all upon the Fly, among rhythmic slaps of Batter and Spoon, coaxed and stolen what they might, proceed, as upon each afternoon all this snowy Advent, to a comfortable Room at the rear of the House, years since given over to their carefree Assaults. This Christmastide of 1786, with the War settled and the Nation bickering itself into Fragments, wounds bodily and ghostly, great and small, go aching on, not every one commemorated,— nor, too often, even recounted.
Broad Overview
Truthfully, writing a review for this novel is quite daunting as what can be expressed? I’m unsure, I feel sort of speechless by the journey I undertook. I experienced so much yet barely grasped the surface yet remained enraptured by it from beginning to end. Nevertheless, it’s one of the most perfect books ever constructed. It’s not my favourite of all time (though one of my favourites) nor the best book of all time (a claim like that feels too subjective) nevertheless, it’s a masterpiece. The more you reflect upon the book, the more impressive and thought-provoking it ends up becoming (the tragedy and comedy heightens in reflection); it’s one of those achievements that feels like it can only be attained by a lifetime of work, and you will be remembered by the books (and apparently he has two more that are critically beloved, if not more), like David Foster Wallace's Infinite Jest, James Joyce's Ulysses, Mervyn Peake's Gormenghast trilogy, or J.R.R. Tolkien's Lord of the Rings. Before even beginning the review properly, I will state, this is my first Thomas Pynchon novel. I read this first because I saw a video stating a guide to get into all his books, and one interesting thought experiment the individual made was reading his novels chronologically as he outlines the history of America from its origins to 9/11. It sounded like an amazing prospect, so I decided to undertake that path.
Writing Style and Broad Musings
The writing style can be very overwhelming. It uses complex 18th-century vernacular emulating the style of the time. It does take some time to adjust, but then slowly, once you adjust to it, you can’t help finding the writing both funnier and sadder and carrying so much weight at the same time. One passage of many would be this one:
“What Machine is it,” young Cherrycoke later bade himself goodnight, “that bears us along so relentlessly? We go rattling thro’ another Day,— another Year,— as thro’ an empty Town without a Name, in the Midnight . . . we have but Memories of some Pause at the Pleasure-Spas of our younger Day, the Maidens, the Cards, the Claret,— we seek to extend our stay, but now a silent Functionary in dark Livery indicates it is time to re-board the Coach, and resume the Journey. Long before the Destination, moreover, shall this Machine come abruptly to a Stop . . . gather’d dense with Fear, shall we open the Door to confer with the Driver, to discover that there is no Driver, . . . no Horses, . . . only the Machine, fading as we stand, and a Prairie of desperate Immensity. . . .”
In particular, those descriptions and manner of speech. Especially the conversation of Mason & Dixon, but even beyond them, a lot of the side casts.
In terms of a random footnote I found on the web that may be true or not, apparently at one point it was so authentic there were discussions by the MLA (Modern Language Association) considering the book to be an 18th-century novel. Obviously, it’s false, especially with how it’s only a tale that can be told from a modern perspective, especially with its post-modern musings throughout the entire body of text. True or not, it’s just so authentic that you will believe it.
I will discuss the themes shortly (too much to properly extrapolate), but fundamentally the book is a Christmas story, and one told to children who are up past their bedtime. Despite the many allusions that were lost on me, something did click subconsciously, which I can’t properly articulate, but overall, it is just excellent storytelling. It’s an epic, not just with the rich lives and personalities of our protagonist, but it is also a history of the individuals who aren’t a part of the history books, the unspoken voice. The voices that aren’t preserved in our history books remain as echoes, but we can extrapolate the missing link. It’s an unreliable history, as Rev. Well, was a rebellious figure:
Carelessness of Youth beside it,— the Crime they styl’d ‘Anonymity.’ That is, I left messages posted publicly, but did not sign them. I knew some night-running lads in the district who let me use their Printing-Press,— somehow, what I got into printing up, were Accounts of certain Crimes I had observ’d, committed by the Stronger against the Weaker,— enclosures, evictions, Assize verdicts, Activities of the Military,— giving the Names of as many of the Perpetrators as I was sure of, yet keeping back what I foolishly imagin’d my own, till the Night I was tipp’d and brought in to London, in Chains, and clapp’d in the Tower.
With the Rev’s personal history, speaking against what he views as injustice and not personally witnessing a lot of the events that unfolded, how much can be true? Is it a good debate? Does it simply miss the point? Did our chief protagonists really experience everything that is relayed? Is some of the text not told by Rev, but secretly by TP to us with certain interjections? There obviously has to be an important reason from a thematic purpose why the tale is told to children (future generation), to young adults, and to older adults. How the framing device that isn’t just this one and very free-flowing, it speaks on the study of historiography. It’s a warm novel with very rich characters who grow and reevaluate themselves along the journey, and it’s a pleasure to read.
Themes
History, Historiography and The Purpose?
Following up my point from before, how history is conveyed is a very important theme. Cherrycoke aptly describes it in this passage:
Facts are but the Play-things of lawyers,— Tops and Hoops, forever a-spin. . . . Alas, the Historian may indulge no such idle Rotating. History is not Chronology, for that is left to lawyers,— nor is it Remembrance, for Remembrance belongs to the People. History can as little pretend to the Veracity of the one, as claim the Power of the other,— her Practitioners, to survive, must soon learn the arts of the quidnunc, spy, and Taproom Wit,— that there may ever continue more than one life-line back into a Past we risk, each day, losing our forebears in forever,— not a Chain of single Links, for one broken Link could lose us All,— rather, a great disorderly Tangle of Lines, long and short, weak and strong, vanishing into the Mnemonick Deep, with only their Destination in common.
TP is showing his admiration of historians and the difficult tasks they must do. Facts for lawyers can bend the truth for their strategic purposes rather than the pursuit of the whole truth (which is tough with the missing pieces of history). It's the in-between state of chronoloy (factual) and remembrance (interpersonal), providing interpretation as one of a detective or journalist and overall context. Taking jumbled pieces and creating coherency from something that is messy. As he notes, history isn't just listing out facts (as it is often taught in school badly). Not a single chain, as the job of a historian is navigating the truths of even texts that can be deemed mostly false. It's the pursuit to preserve the past for future generations. Creating overall coherence while acknowledging the complexity and ambiguity.
What I found really fascinating about the history is how TP compiles it all together (especially the relationship to time and space). Interestingly, I was reading The Wager by David Grann, a nonfiction book taking place in the same century with a modern perspective as Mason and Dixon. There’s one line that stands very true:
Empires preserve their power with the stories that they tell, but just as critical are the stories they don’t—the dark silences they impose, the pages they tear out.
TP is very fascinated in illuminating what might have been with those pages torn out. As the foundation of modern America was built upon Enlightenment thought, a certain individual also rose to prominence: Edward Gibbon, whose styled “history” came to be synonymous with strictly chronological “grand narrative”. The book pretty much attacks that notion of history, as Alexei Lalo states in his article Bely and Pynchon, “that the Enlightenment hope for overall rationalization via simplistic classifications and drawing arbitrary lines and false boundaries has proved counterproductive” thus creating a counter-Enlightenment narratology to comment on the political and cultural biases that motivated calendar “correction” and the Mason-Dixon Line, then and how the anachronism is a critique of rationalism (pg. 11 Multiple Worlds of Pynchon's Mason & Dixon). Genuinely, it’s all a massive rabbit hole, and yeah, you can’t help but be awed by the genius in reflection.
Time
While history and slavery are fundamental themes one can gather immediately, it’s all in context with Time as a construction. For an era that was built on progress through Reason, the amount of myth and folklore is quite a good contrast. At a certain point, time stops being simply linear but highlights the cyclical or mythical nature of it. This all comes to a conclusion, well, everything in the novel, from characters and all its central themes, reaches its finality at the end of Part 2.
The surveyors’ Line, meant to settle a border dispute, becomes a harbinger of violence and exploitation, suggesting that “progress” often resurrects old evils in new forms. Even the novel’s language—written in 18th-century pastiche but peppered with postmodern irony—collapses timelines, drawing parallels between colonial expansion and modern globalisation. Pynchon hints that time is less a line than a spiral, looping back to confront us with unresolved sins.
Another very important point is those missing 11 days. The British Empire for a long time was on the Julian calendar, but one year they decided to switch to the Gregorian calendar, and they decided to skip 11 days to align with it. If you are observing as a human construct, it hasn’t disappeared the same has simply changed; the phenomena have remained constant. There’s a deep discussion about time being stolen, not only their pursuing their imperialistic empire they are conducting this action. The book makes you question institutional structures of power and authorises time itself to a host of people. Mason is very cautious about it; he can’t simply accept that fact, so he creates an idea that time is looping all around him. It’s sort of a spiritual awakening, and those missing 11 days and time digressions are uttered everywhere in the novel.
Slavery, Colonialism and Native American Exploitation
One undeniable theme of the novel is the horrors of slavery. How America, as you know, was shaped by their blood and sweat. While there are moments of condemnation, discussions of complicity, the chains of human civilisation, which is continuously investigated and commented upon in the entire novel, TP is less interested in the reader (if they happen to be American though this isn't an America only issue) feeling bad about the past, it’s more so an investigation: how did we get here? It’s an ontological question of what the secret power structures and forces are undergirding what we are today.
There are so many quotes about slavery that were so poignant and depressing; one such quote is Johanna and her senior slave in Cape Town:
In Johanna’s intrigue to bring together Mason and her senior slave, however, ’tis the Slavery, not any form of Desire, that is of the essence. Dixon, out of these particular meshes, can see it,— Mason cannot. Indifferent to Visibility, wrapt in the melancholy Winds that choir all night long, persists an Obsession or Siege by something much older than anyone here, an injustice that will not cancel out. Men of Reason will define a Ghost as nothing more otherworldly than a wrong unrighted, which like an uneasy spirit cannot move on,— needing help we cannot usually give,— nor always find the people it needs to see,— or who need to see it. But here is a Collective Ghost of more than household Scale,— the Wrongs committed Daily against the Slaves, petty and grave ones alike, going unrecorded, charm’d invisible to history, invisible yet possessing Mass, and Velocity, able not only to rattle Chains but to break them as well. The precariousness to Life here, the need to keep the Ghost propitiated, Day to Day, via the Company’s merciless Priesthoods and many-Volum’d Codes, brings all but the hardiest souls sooner or later to consider the Primary Questions more or less undiluted. Slaves here commit suicide at a frightening Rate,— but so do the Whites, for no reason, or for a Reason ubiquitous and unaddress’d, which may bear Acquaintance but a Moment at a Time. Mason, as he comes to recognize the sorrowful Nakedness of the Arrangements here, grows morose, whilst Dixon makes a point of treating Slaves with the Courtesy he is never quite able to summon for their Masters.
In a nutshell, it’s the correlation of colonialism, slavery, and, well, genocide to unbridled capitalism. It can be viewed as a commentary on how we are enslaved to our past. How those invisible voices still contain mass and are able to break the chains. While we still succumb to our own hubris, certain individuals learns the wrong lesson from history, progress is still being made. This one sequence in the Dutch colonies is a microcosm of the big at large about slavery. It’s brought up time and time again, and in America particularly so with the Native Americans. Moments of the book in association with Natives made me so profoundly sad and moved. Certain monologues, especially near the end, gave such insight it’s difficult to describe.
Comedy and Tragedy
Describing humour is simply missing the point, so I won’t describe it but point out it was wonderful. The book has a wide range of lowbrow and highbrow humour, it’s genuinely fun to read. Some of the more fantastical aspects were a delight. It’s surprising how some of the more absurd aspects can slowly become one of the profound moments of the book, but what’s even more interesting is how much it’s derived from some truth twisted in a unique way. Combining that comedy and tragedy becoming so ubiquitous with each other, like it’s often highlighted in Don Quixote.
Characters
I won’t go too in-depth, but I have to say it’s fantastic across the board. The MVP to me was Dixon, I don’t think that’s a surprise, as his ideals are more aligned to mine, and seeing his worldview fundamentally shift over the course of years is brilliant. Mason is also wonderful; it’s the relationship of these two gentlemen that makes everything come together so organically. There are many other characters who are rich and full of life; Pynchon makes the 18th century feel so alive from the incredible atmosphere and depiction of regular folks (the folks who don’t have a voice in history). I loved Cherry Coke, his family musings, and even the historical figures that have time to shine.
Conclusion
There is a lot more that can be said, but that’s all I feel comfortable in writing. I will just note two things: firstly, the ending is just brilliant in every sense and really heightens everything that came before. It’s one of those books that just keeps on giving. In my review, I didn’t mention Cape Town, St. Helena, and America as characters; I just like to mention they were characters with how TP wrote them. I don’t know TP personally, but the book genuinely felt like the author was coming to terms with America’s colonial past. How can a country proudly profess freedom, yet it’s built upon the blood of slaves? How can you reconcile this contradiction? I believe TP did a brilliant job of conveying America’s sin yet showcasing its beauty at the same time (his love for his homeland). It’s a warm novel, and he handles it tastefully. In conclusion, I’ve devoted months reading it, and it was absolutely worth it, and I’m excited to reread it in the future.
9.5/10