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Update: Finished it. Kept the 2/5 score. The writing isn't that bad. This isn't the way a story should be written, as every character is just an author self insert, but if I look at the book purely as a vehicle for Heinlein to explore his own ideas (well, mostly to preach them), then this book has some merit. Ignoring the incest (which isn't very doable, but still), the main character is interesting and at times well-written.
Original review:
DNF 43%.
(tl;dr: The problem is not that there's incest, but that this book reads like an incest fantasy with little else to it, and that the character writing is one of Heinlein's worst.)
It's not a bad book. In most respects it's a usual Heinlein book, with the usual Heinlein caveats. Only this one takes the Heinlineniness to the extreme: every character with any kind of page time, and I mean EVERY character, is simply a self insert of the author with zero variation. In his other books usually every character portrays a different aspect of Heinlein, but here they're all exactly the same. Also, there's no plot and no action, and instead a lot of political ramblings and sex.
This is a historical drama about Maureen Johnson, a 19th century girl (and later woman) experimenting with sex, getting married, and living in general. Sounds interesting? in theory, sure. Even the incest could, in theory, be explored in an interesting manner. But it isn't.
The problem isn't the content, but the execution: 1. It reads purely like a sexual fantasy. 2. Every character is just Heinlein (I mean, more than usual). 3. There's only the preaching of ideas, never explorations of them. 4. Having no plot, the characters have to do the heavy lifting -- but they aren't nearly good enough for that.
Imagine an 80 year old man. He just wrote a book. The book is about a fourteen year old girl in the late 19th century who's character is exactly like the old man's. She's hypersexual, and strongly attracted to her father, who's an exact image of the old man. Her body leaves a scent that makes men unable to control themselves around her, so she has to wash her skin regularly. She often enters into "rut", unable to think of anything other than sex. She sleeps with all sorts of people, most of them disappointing to her. She finds a perfect man and marries him. He is also an exact copy of the old man. They have lots of sex. Both of them just happen to be swingers, irreligious, and libertarian, with the same opinions on everything else. They have several children. I haven't gotten to that part yet, but from what I hear one of the children (Lazarus) will later, as an adult, marry his mother.
If this is your kind of book, I'm honestly not judging you (though I am judging the book). The contents are not for me, and the writing I simply find bad.
Original review:
DNF 43%.
(tl;dr: The problem is not that there's incest, but that this book reads like an incest fantasy with little else to it, and that the character writing is one of Heinlein's worst.)
It's not a bad book. In most respects it's a usual Heinlein book, with the usual Heinlein caveats. Only this one takes the Heinlineniness to the extreme: every character with any kind of page time, and I mean EVERY character, is simply a self insert of the author with zero variation. In his other books usually every character portrays a different aspect of Heinlein, but here they're all exactly the same. Also, there's no plot and no action, and instead a lot of political ramblings and sex.
This is a historical drama about Maureen Johnson, a 19th century girl (and later woman) experimenting with sex, getting married, and living in general. Sounds interesting? in theory, sure. Even the incest could, in theory, be explored in an interesting manner. But it isn't.
The problem isn't the content, but the execution: 1. It reads purely like a sexual fantasy. 2. Every character is just Heinlein (I mean, more than usual). 3. There's only the preaching of ideas, never explorations of them. 4. Having no plot, the characters have to do the heavy lifting -- but they aren't nearly good enough for that.
Imagine an 80 year old man. He just wrote a book. The book is about a fourteen year old girl in the late 19th century who's character is exactly like the old man's. She's hypersexual, and strongly attracted to her father, who's an exact image of the old man. Her body leaves a scent that makes men unable to control themselves around her, so she has to wash her skin regularly. She often enters into "rut", unable to think of anything other than sex. She sleeps with all sorts of people, most of them disappointing to her. She finds a perfect man and marries him. He is also an exact copy of the old man. They have lots of sex. Both of them just happen to be swingers, irreligious, and libertarian, with the same opinions on everything else. They have several children. I haven't gotten to that part yet, but from what I hear one of the children (Lazarus) will later, as an adult, marry his mother.
If this is your kind of book, I'm honestly not judging you (though I am judging the book). The contents are not for me, and the writing I simply find bad.