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I really like the metaphor Joseph sets up of going to the heart of darkness being a drip to the dark jungles of Africa and finding a madman at the heart. He is charismatic and has basically become the leader of a tribe and using them for promoting violence for his own end. Stealing valuable resources.
So many modern stories use this outline to tell the horrors that happen in colonization still. It really is a powerful story.
BUT, I don't think his writing style is very good. I mean, his ideas are great and he has some great lines, but the whole tale is told by the narrator, Marlow and he is telling someone about to go on a voyage this story from the past when he went into the Congo. It's all a story told. Almost all the paragraphs are very long One paragraph could be a whole page long.
In one paragraph, he might have 3 or 4 people speaking and quoting them in the same paragraph and it is difficult to understand who is doing the talking. I mean we know who is talking, but I mean who is saying what in the paragraph. I'm not saying it's the best story, but Anne Rice's 'Interview with a Vampire' does a great job with this way of writing someone who is telling you a story. You can understand what the character is saying and who is talking. I like the way Anne used double quotes and she broke up the paragraphs like someone was speaking. She also comes back to the present and we see what's going on with the person and interviewer before going back to the story to remember the device being used. Joseph has a great story here, but I really don't like his writing style.
I'm not saying my writing is great, but I do read extensively. It was kind of a mess the way he did it. I say there is still brilliance in his writing and the layers he puts in the story. I don't want to take away from that, but his paragraph structure is a mess. I have been told by many people and heard professional writers say that you want to see as much blank page as words on the page, because that means there is dialogue. Looking at the page, it was almost all words. The average page has 2-3 paragraphs.
Anyway, I was going to give this 3 stars or less, but I did discuss this with my dad and he reminded me how much is actually in the book. I had to give it more stars. I still have the problem with his writing structure, but oh well.
So many modern stories use this outline to tell the horrors that happen in colonization still. It really is a powerful story.
BUT, I don't think his writing style is very good. I mean, his ideas are great and he has some great lines, but the whole tale is told by the narrator, Marlow and he is telling someone about to go on a voyage this story from the past when he went into the Congo. It's all a story told. Almost all the paragraphs are very long One paragraph could be a whole page long.
In one paragraph, he might have 3 or 4 people speaking and quoting them in the same paragraph and it is difficult to understand who is doing the talking. I mean we know who is talking, but I mean who is saying what in the paragraph. I'm not saying it's the best story, but Anne Rice's 'Interview with a Vampire' does a great job with this way of writing someone who is telling you a story. You can understand what the character is saying and who is talking. I like the way Anne used double quotes and she broke up the paragraphs like someone was speaking. She also comes back to the present and we see what's going on with the person and interviewer before going back to the story to remember the device being used. Joseph has a great story here, but I really don't like his writing style.
I'm not saying my writing is great, but I do read extensively. It was kind of a mess the way he did it. I say there is still brilliance in his writing and the layers he puts in the story. I don't want to take away from that, but his paragraph structure is a mess. I have been told by many people and heard professional writers say that you want to see as much blank page as words on the page, because that means there is dialogue. Looking at the page, it was almost all words. The average page has 2-3 paragraphs.
Anyway, I was going to give this 3 stars or less, but I did discuss this with my dad and he reminded me how much is actually in the book. I had to give it more stars. I still have the problem with his writing structure, but oh well.