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Rating(3.9 / 5.0, 16 votes)
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April 17,2025
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This book chronicles the journey of two children coming from England to America. It is a great book to use when discussing the conditions aboard the Mayflower as the Pilgrims were making their journey. The students can compare and contrast the children's different experiences, one above deck and one below deck.
April 17,2025
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This is the fourth in a series of unusual historical-reenactment stories by Kate Waters. Each is a simple, fictional narrative told from the first-person perspective. They're illustrated with photographs of reenactors in period costumes, on the site of a historical restoration. This story takes place on the Mayflower II, a reproduction of the original merchant ship.

When I first encountered these stories, I frankly didn't love them. The lighting in the photographs could be improved, and while the text reflects the flavor of 17th-century English, the story quality isn't incredible. However, the great feature of this story is its carefully-researched setting and costumes. Many scenes evoke the feeling of actually being there. The Pilgrims shivering in the 'tween decks make the reader feel cold and scratchy, and the sight of a boy caulking storm-wrought leaks in the dark hold gives a sense of the dread those leaks inspired. If you're not able to actually visit the real Plimoth Plantation, this is the next best thing. It's a really nice supplement to a study of the Pilgrims.
April 17,2025
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Similar to Waters's other Plimoth Plantation books (Sarah Morton's Day: A Day In The Life Of A Pilgrim Girl, Samuel Eaton's Day: A Day in the Life of a Pilgrim Boy, Tapenum's Day: A Wampanoag Indian Boy In Pilgrim Times:). The book is greatly enhanced by the back matter, which gives technical details of the ship, what happened in history, biographical information about the historical figures (and the invented character), and about the children who appear in the photographs.
April 17,2025
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1. Awards received: none

2. Appropriate grade level: 2nd Grade

3. Original Summary: It is the Fall of 1620 and the Mayflower is making its way across the Atlantic Ocean. Join William Small, the ship's apprentice, as he helps Christopher Jones, the master of the ship, sail the Mayflower. Along the way William befriends Ellen Moore, a passenger girl traveling on the Mayflower to the English colonies.

4. Original Review: The use of photographs of interpreters and the reconstructed Mayflower II catapults the reader into 1620. I found some of the language to be difficult but there is a glossary in the back of the book with helpful definitions for some of the harder/period terms. Overall, this book is a simple representation of life on the Mayflower with a mixture of real and fictional characters.

5. Possible in class uses: This book can be used to introduce some new vocabulary for 2nd Grade students: dire, douse, fair, fearsome, fetch, hammock, hatch, rank, stench, etc.

This book could also be used to show what life was like for the early settlers from England. The photos capture what the settlers wore, what they did in their freetime, what kinds of food they ate, and what sort of technologies they had.
April 17,2025
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This book had alot of high level maritime vocabulary, which would be great to build on. The photos of real people add a sense of realism that students may be more apt to connect to.
April 17,2025
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April 17,2025
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On the Mayflower: Voyage of the Ship’s Apprentice & a Passenger Girl is a historical fiction book written by Kate Waters. This book is about the Mayflower, a boat, leaving England and coming to America. This is a great educational book for children from ages 5 to 8 years. The illustrations in the book are real or look real pictures of on the boat. This was a very important event through history and it is important for children to know what went on in their life before they were born and where they may have come from. This book has a great theme and plot. The theme of the book is the Mayflower and coming to America. The illustrations in this book were great and I liked that they were real pictures or at least looked real. I thought the actually content of the book could be a little more interesting; it was a tad bit boring. This is a great educational book great for school and great for history class.
April 17,2025
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A fitting addition to Kate Waters' series on Plimouth Plantation, "On the Mayflower" takes a slightly different approach.

The subtitle: Voyage of a Ship's Apprentice & a Passenger Girl provides a brief glimpse into this alternate view of the Pilgrims. William Small, the Ship's Apprentice, who serves as narrator is a fictional character. The Passenger Girl, Ellen Moore, age 8 (but played by a 10 year old) was on the ship, though there is no record of her in the colony, indicating she probably died on ship or during the long, hard, winter.

As such, this book is more a biography of the Mayflower itself than the individual people. Since so little is known the voyage, the text focus' on the duties of William Small as Ship's Apprentice, the construction of the Mayflower, the duties of Ellen as Passenger Girl, the horrible autumn storm that pushed them off course, and the fictional friendship between the two young people.

End notes include a brief history of the Mayflower, a rendering of what she may have looked like (with labeling of her decks, sails, etc), as well as an overview of the Mayflower II which is part of the Plimouth Plantation museum. A brief explanation of why the voyage was so difficult, and the storm patterns of the Atlantic is followed by brief biographies of the Mayflower's Master (Christopher Jones), the construction of William Small, Ellen Moore and the actors who interpreted William and Ellen for the publication.

I love the straight forward summary of the Pilgrim's experience from a child's perspective, both the good and the bad, that forms this excellent series. It is cherished in our home school. I highly recommend it.
April 17,2025
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This book has people dressed in period outfits, and the photos were taken on board the MAYFLOWER II, which is now part of Plimouth Plantation in Plymouth, Massachusetts. Some of the photos look a bit too clean and staged for me, which ruins some of the realism of the narration. Still, it's a good book for kids to learn about a couple of young kids who traveled aboard the MAYFLOWER in 1620. What a horrible trip that must have been!
April 17,2025
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This book would've been better if they had better pictures. I could tell the boy (main character) just wanted to get on his iPhone the second he was done having to reenact this. Also, it was a quite short book that could've been turned solely into a great novel. Not a 1-star-rating book.
April 17,2025
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Summary:
This book is about the mayflower. This book is a simpler version of how on September 6, 1620 the ship called the mayflower left England and sailed into the Atlantic Ocean. This explains the voyage of the mayflower. This book talks about the people on the mayflower and how they felt and this book also give a diagram of what the ship looked like and it is labeled so you know what each thing is called.
Like or not:
I liked this book because it made me feel like I was just reading a story about a ship but in all reality this actually happened. I did not feel like I was reading history but mainly because when I think about reading history I think about reading a boring textbook but this book was so great. I loved it.
Classroom:
I would use this in my classroom. I would love to have them read this book for a little history lesson and then have them look more up about the mayflower. This book have a diagram of the ship and I would have my class label it for a grade. This book also have vocabulary at the end of the book so you could have a vocab quiz after reading this book.
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