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I was initially intrigued by the premise: a tale that was both science fiction and fantasy, fairy tale and space exploration.
But I got tired of Elana's constant self-doubt, and her father's endless moralizing. It was worsened by the fact that every time he had to explain something to her about their plan, or about her commitment to their service, or basically any moral choice she made, she then spent a few pages whining or agonizing about it. And then, sometimes, she also had to "explain" it again in vague, magical terms to Georyn, because his native/uncivilized status meant they couldn't reveal themselves as alien.
The actual plot got lost for me in the psychological rigamarole. Too much introspection and not enough actually happening.
But I got tired of Elana's constant self-doubt, and her father's endless moralizing. It was worsened by the fact that every time he had to explain something to her about their plan, or about her commitment to their service, or basically any moral choice she made, she then spent a few pages whining or agonizing about it. And then, sometimes, she also had to "explain" it again in vague, magical terms to Georyn, because his native/uncivilized status meant they couldn't reveal themselves as alien.
The actual plot got lost for me in the psychological rigamarole. Too much introspection and not enough actually happening.