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The only thing I liked about this was the story concept. It's a good supernatural thriller concept, I'm sure it could make for a gripping tale that I wouldn't want to put down.
But not in this form, sadly. I have three major problems with the execution which completely spoiled my involvement in the story.
First, there's no sense of authenticity. The book is set in 1930's Calcutta, but except for street names and place names, you'd never know. It doesn't feel Indian, and it doesn't feel 1930's: where are the cultural nods, where are the technologies that would tie it to a time. And where are the people? This Calcutta feels like a ghost town - it could be anywhere.
Second, the authorial voice is inconsistent. There's a conceit that the story is being retold many years later by one of the protagonists, who left the city hours after the story completes and never saw his friends again. But it's all in 3rd person and hops from person to person. How does he know what happened to the others? How would anybody know the omnisicient commentary about the state of mind and awareness of the characters involved?
Finally, there's no grounding for the supernatural elements. The world never feels consistent, as readers we don't know what's powers are likely to manifest, so the events feel chaotic and unplanned. That's extremely poor worldbuilding, which robs the story of any tension.
A disappointment.
But not in this form, sadly. I have three major problems with the execution which completely spoiled my involvement in the story.
First, there's no sense of authenticity. The book is set in 1930's Calcutta, but except for street names and place names, you'd never know. It doesn't feel Indian, and it doesn't feel 1930's: where are the cultural nods, where are the technologies that would tie it to a time. And where are the people? This Calcutta feels like a ghost town - it could be anywhere.
Second, the authorial voice is inconsistent. There's a conceit that the story is being retold many years later by one of the protagonists, who left the city hours after the story completes and never saw his friends again. But it's all in 3rd person and hops from person to person. How does he know what happened to the others? How would anybody know the omnisicient commentary about the state of mind and awareness of the characters involved?
Finally, there's no grounding for the supernatural elements. The world never feels consistent, as readers we don't know what's powers are likely to manifest, so the events feel chaotic and unplanned. That's extremely poor worldbuilding, which robs the story of any tension.
A disappointment.