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I picked this book up for a Book Pal read. We thought it looked exciting, and as I love historical horrors as well as cabin fever / winterscape settings, all the more reason to read it.
Sadly we had to stop 1/4 through, it was that tedious and boring. I personally stopped at page 230. This book is nearly 1,000 pages long, and nothing happened after the initial 100 pages.
The main faults, other than the crucial fact that the writer had no clear idea what the story was suppossed to be, were the filler material and flat, one dimensional characters. All the characters were unsympathetic and dull. We hardly got to understand their plight or POV as the story kept periodically moving back to a lesson in life at sea and survival.
Most of the chapters is filled with Simmons reminding you in gratuitous detail, ad nauseum, all about the daily lives of sailors on a years long sea voyage, combat, military ranks, wilderness survival, and the horrors of scurvy. Plus, how horrifying it is to have gay men on board H.M's ship - never mind the monster what is stalking and killing our heroes. Homophobia was rampant in that era, notoriously upheld strictly in the navy, but it becomes one of the main plots here. The story of the mysterious beast falls by the wayside and is nearly obliterated as the human cast are infinitely more concerned with the terror of gay sex and scurvy. You get the impression that Mr Simmons shares that idea.
Despite the random beast attacks and annoying, repetitive, useless flashback segments chronicling the heroes' various scandals that took place decades ago, Simmons keeps taking our focus back to scurvy and why we should fear it.
You wind up turning each page, anticipating another waffling bit of filler about a lesson in scurvy or mens' underclothes.
His next favourite, nearly equally abused subject is the topic of tinned food, sledges, and how many layers of clothing each man is wearing every moment we're reintroduced to him.
I've read quite a lot of and am passionate for wilderness survival books, penned by authors who have actually gone out and done it; such as Gary Paulsen and Michelle Paver. Dan Simmons' book here takes the accuracy & realism way too far by presenting it as an instructional, how-to guide book without any humour or making it a fun read. Paulsen covers the realism and how-to in an interesting, yet appropriate and brief way without leaving you lost. He does not forget he is writing a story, not a boy scouts or rangers guide book, unlike Simmons.
Simmons however manages to write a deep guide that finds you skipping it at the first mention (for the 100th time, and never the last) of the ins & outs of erecting tents, heating snow into water, opening a can, and why the men should be wearing gloves or eating certain foods to avoid scurvy.
There's nearly two months I'll never get back, and it will be a long time before I want to see the mention of or hear about scurvy or erecting tents again due to the countless times Mr Simmons kept repeating it. I sincerely doubt he had employed an editor, as other evidence from poor grammar points to it too.
Sadly we had to stop 1/4 through, it was that tedious and boring. I personally stopped at page 230. This book is nearly 1,000 pages long, and nothing happened after the initial 100 pages.
The main faults, other than the crucial fact that the writer had no clear idea what the story was suppossed to be, were the filler material and flat, one dimensional characters. All the characters were unsympathetic and dull. We hardly got to understand their plight or POV as the story kept periodically moving back to a lesson in life at sea and survival.
Most of the chapters is filled with Simmons reminding you in gratuitous detail, ad nauseum, all about the daily lives of sailors on a years long sea voyage, combat, military ranks, wilderness survival, and the horrors of scurvy. Plus, how horrifying it is to have gay men on board H.M's ship - never mind the monster what is stalking and killing our heroes. Homophobia was rampant in that era, notoriously upheld strictly in the navy, but it becomes one of the main plots here. The story of the mysterious beast falls by the wayside and is nearly obliterated as the human cast are infinitely more concerned with the terror of gay sex and scurvy. You get the impression that Mr Simmons shares that idea.
Despite the random beast attacks and annoying, repetitive, useless flashback segments chronicling the heroes' various scandals that took place decades ago, Simmons keeps taking our focus back to scurvy and why we should fear it.
You wind up turning each page, anticipating another waffling bit of filler about a lesson in scurvy or mens' underclothes.
His next favourite, nearly equally abused subject is the topic of tinned food, sledges, and how many layers of clothing each man is wearing every moment we're reintroduced to him.
I've read quite a lot of and am passionate for wilderness survival books, penned by authors who have actually gone out and done it; such as Gary Paulsen and Michelle Paver. Dan Simmons' book here takes the accuracy & realism way too far by presenting it as an instructional, how-to guide book without any humour or making it a fun read. Paulsen covers the realism and how-to in an interesting, yet appropriate and brief way without leaving you lost. He does not forget he is writing a story, not a boy scouts or rangers guide book, unlike Simmons.
Simmons however manages to write a deep guide that finds you skipping it at the first mention (for the 100th time, and never the last) of the ins & outs of erecting tents, heating snow into water, opening a can, and why the men should be wearing gloves or eating certain foods to avoid scurvy.
There's nearly two months I'll never get back, and it will be a long time before I want to see the mention of or hear about scurvy or erecting tents again due to the countless times Mr Simmons kept repeating it. I sincerely doubt he had employed an editor, as other evidence from poor grammar points to it too.