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As i read this book to my kids it left me wondering if i had read it before. I knew that if i did, it was in my youth. Last night a bit of memory must have triggered in my brain. I did read this book before. I read it in the High School Library in a single sitting when i was 15 or 16. It's a simplistic story. One PoV. Simple sentences and a clear line of thought make it a swift read.
Not sure if it's the writer or just the fact that it's a YA book, but i like the simplicity of the writing. Not too flowery nor academic. He does tend to repeat things way too much. But the writing is sound. PoV is not an issue with a one-character survival story. Kids are enjoying it.
Very repetitious. At times unbearable. You can literally skip several sentences per page with no negative repercussions. And that's exactly what i did.
In fact, it makes the story clearer to skip the repetitive sentences. At first i thought it was because the main character hit his head and suffered a concussion. But No, that is the author's writing style blaring through the story. Not sure why he did it? Maybe he figured it would make his story more intense.
The word count could be cut by at least 1/3 with a proper edit.
Not sure if it's the writer or just the fact that it's a YA book, but i like the simplicity of the writing. Not too flowery nor academic. He does tend to repeat things way too much. But the writing is sound. PoV is not an issue with a one-character survival story. Kids are enjoying it.
Very repetitious. At times unbearable. You can literally skip several sentences per page with no negative repercussions. And that's exactly what i did.
In fact, it makes the story clearer to skip the repetitive sentences. At first i thought it was because the main character hit his head and suffered a concussion. But No, that is the author's writing style blaring through the story. Not sure why he did it? Maybe he figured it would make his story more intense.
The word count could be cut by at least 1/3 with a proper edit.