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I was eager to read this because I moved to Philadelphia during Ed Rendell's first term and now work for the City. Although I'm glad I read it, I was disappointed.
One issue I had with the book is Bissinger's writing style. He's a good writer, with ability to convey both narrative and characterization, but he suffers from a need to artificially dress up his prose. The metaphors were so frequent (e.g., two in two sentences) that they became intrusive and the resultant artificiality clogged up his prose.
I would have liked a more detailed explanation of the various events that Bissinger described. For all the leadup to the 1992 battle with the unions, I had no sense of how the City accomplished reforms with the FOP, which settled its contract before DC 33 did, the latter which is the main focus of the first quarter of the book. Contracting out was a concession obtained during the negotiations, but there is very little discussion of how this played out, other than to state the amount of savings obtained and to describe a libertarian Mayoral employee's disillusionment with things not going further.
There are other events that are described for which there is no follow-up, which is frustrating. But I have to give credit for the ending, which is bleaker than I expected it to be. I don't want to spoil the ending, but it is a powerful one.
One issue I had with the book is Bissinger's writing style. He's a good writer, with ability to convey both narrative and characterization, but he suffers from a need to artificially dress up his prose. The metaphors were so frequent (e.g., two in two sentences) that they became intrusive and the resultant artificiality clogged up his prose.
I would have liked a more detailed explanation of the various events that Bissinger described. For all the leadup to the 1992 battle with the unions, I had no sense of how the City accomplished reforms with the FOP, which settled its contract before DC 33 did, the latter which is the main focus of the first quarter of the book. Contracting out was a concession obtained during the negotiations, but there is very little discussion of how this played out, other than to state the amount of savings obtained and to describe a libertarian Mayoral employee's disillusionment with things not going further.
There are other events that are described for which there is no follow-up, which is frustrating. But I have to give credit for the ending, which is bleaker than I expected it to be. I don't want to spoil the ending, but it is a powerful one.