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The first thing I noticed about this book is that it's poorly edited. The author strings multiple phrases together in one sentence and only uses commas to hold them together, where some semi-colons would helped organize it much better. The other thing I noticed fairly quickly is that it's not exceptionally well-written. There is too much filler that only dilutes the page. Some authors, most notably Dickens, can string long sentences together filled with adjectives that add layer and texture and detail until you can hear it and smell it. The rest of us are better off editing sentences down to the simplest structure possible. This invites the reader to fill in the spaces and come along on the ride.
In the preface the author describes the book as a novel; though based on his life experiences he's taken some liberties with the timeline and sprinkled in some anecdotes. I'd call the book a memoir; an autobiography that's been tweaked. What it is not is a how-to book. Many self-help things are mentioned; tai-chi, meditation, vegetarian diet. But none are described in enough detail for the reader to know how to start practicing them. Nor is there a list of references to go to for more information. Also, the author's path to self-realization was facilitated, in many ways manipulated, by his mentor. Without a similar mentor the rest of us will not be able to find our path.
But I am glad I read the book. It illustrates many important concepts; the inter-connectedness of all things, our need to get out of our own way to achieve the joy we seek. And even though other spiritually themed books work better as novels, Paulo Coelho's The Alchemist, and Deepak Chopra is a better writer of how-to books, Dan Millmans's journey is a good reminder of those concepts and his point of view will only deepen our understanding of our own spirituality.
I tend to read too fast and have to remind myself to slow down in a really well-written book. For this book, I sped quickly through the parts that didn't seem to offer much and slowed down for the really teachable moments, mostly in the last third of the book.
In the preface the author describes the book as a novel; though based on his life experiences he's taken some liberties with the timeline and sprinkled in some anecdotes. I'd call the book a memoir; an autobiography that's been tweaked. What it is not is a how-to book. Many self-help things are mentioned; tai-chi, meditation, vegetarian diet. But none are described in enough detail for the reader to know how to start practicing them. Nor is there a list of references to go to for more information. Also, the author's path to self-realization was facilitated, in many ways manipulated, by his mentor. Without a similar mentor the rest of us will not be able to find our path.
But I am glad I read the book. It illustrates many important concepts; the inter-connectedness of all things, our need to get out of our own way to achieve the joy we seek. And even though other spiritually themed books work better as novels, Paulo Coelho's The Alchemist, and Deepak Chopra is a better writer of how-to books, Dan Millmans's journey is a good reminder of those concepts and his point of view will only deepen our understanding of our own spirituality.
I tend to read too fast and have to remind myself to slow down in a really well-written book. For this book, I sped quickly through the parts that didn't seem to offer much and slowed down for the really teachable moments, mostly in the last third of the book.