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I was truly and deeply disappointed in this book. I had thoroughly enjoyed the first two installments of the story about a young girl who ingeniously disguises herself as a boy in order to pursue her dream of becoming a knight. She works incredibly hard, with unwavering determination, to overcome her weaknesses and eventually blossoms into a superior knight. The story up until then was simply great, filled with adventure, growth, and excitement. However, I was completely turned off by the extra events that took place in this book, which really bothered me to no end. First of all, I had found this book in the children's section of the library, so naturally, I did not expect to encounter any elements of sex within its pages. Anyhow, the main character, Alanna, begins a sexual relationship with a close friend, Jon. Although the details are not explicitly mentioned, the author writes very clearly that they are intimate. When Jon asks Alanna to marry him, she refuses. As a result, he promptly breaks off their relationship. Then, rather soon after ending her first relationship, she enters into another sexual relationship. I felt that this completely ruined the story that had begun so delightfully. It was as if a beautiful tapestry had been torn and stained. I was so disheartened that I wasn't even able to finish the series. It was a real shame, as the initial premise had so much potential.