It was a truly great and riveting read. It's always an exciting thing to witness Alanna's growth in strength. She has come a long way, and her progress is truly remarkable. The romantic aspect of the story was also very engaging. It revealed a different, more feminine side of Alanna that is often hidden. Due to the need to constantly prove herself as the equal of a man, she has had to suppress this side of her personality. However, in this story, we get to see a more vulnerable and emotional Alanna, which makes her even more endearing.
It's also very satisfying to see that Alanna is finally beginning to command the respect and praise that she so richly deserves. She has been winning over those who oppose her by sheer force of her personality and talent. Her determination and perseverance have paid off, and she is now on the verge of achieving great things. I can't wait to see what the future holds for Alanna and how she will continue to grow and develop as a character.
Closer to a 3.75 out of 5 than a 4, this installment truly showcases the power of a change of scenery for a series. It was an absolute joy to follow Alanna and her man-at-arms Coram as they ventured into the Great Southern Desert and interacted with the Bazhir. Alanna's internal struggles regarding her gender reach a climax here. The cultural and attitudinal differences between her and the Bazhir, along with the discoveries she makes about her evolving feelings towards Prince Jonathan and George Cooper, add depth to her character. After fearing her magical Gift since her duel with Duke Roger of Conte, she now learns to accept and even embrace it.
Apart from one resolution-related quibble (I was disappointed that I never got to "say goodbye" to Alanna's two shaman apprentices), the only issue I had was with Tamora Pierce's writing. It's mainly the same immaturity/quality comment that I had with IN THE HAND OF THE GODDESS. However, having read some of Pierce's later works, I know her writing improves eventually. Despite that, this breath of fresh (and slightly sandy?) summertime air is the most romantic, action-packed, and magical installment of the Song of the Lioness Quartet.
That is, until LIONESS RAMPANT. Which means it's time for a re-read of the finale! ;)
On January 3, 2008, Alanna, now knighted and her true identity revealed, sets off southward to commence her tenure as a wandering knight. She is eager to leave behind the turmoil at court caused by her deception and the slaying of the King's cousin in combat. In her first year as a knight, she undertakes several significant adventures. She joins the desert-dwelling Bazhir and brings about changes among them. She witnesses Prince Jonathan assume the role of the Voice. She also transitions from one Royal lover to another and starts to understand herself as Alanna rather than Alan.
However, the romance aspect in the story leaves much to be desired. I still don't like Jonathan. Although the situation of Alanna being in love with an unsuitable man is interesting and realistic, the way it resolves with some yelling and the parties separating indefinitely is not fulfilling. Moreover, George feels like a rebound. Despite the text's attempt to make it seem otherwise, it's clear that Alanna invites him to bed immediately after learning that Jonathan has moved on to another woman. This is extremely frustrating.
Nevertheless, I do like Alanna and her adventures. The world created is captivating, and I enjoy seeing this lady knight grappling with finding her place and using her voice in a world that seems to have no room or inclination to listen to her. But the romance is so poorly executed that it makes me want to throw things. I hate that Alanna appears to have so little agency, and I'm also critical of Pierce's somewhat problematic approaches to gender and race. Additionally, it's important to note that George getting a chapter from his POV adds depth to the story. And while part of me rebels against Thom's impending downfall as his story of isolation, pride, and idiocy strikes a chord, I also wonder what his story would look like if told differently.
Unfortunately, I'm not certain that this particular installment holds up, not even when compared to my memories.
I recall not being fond of certain aspects when I first read it (cough... the romance... cough), but upon rereading, I find myself liking it even less.
The good points? Well, most of the Bazhir camp was interesting. Alanna finally finding a sort of home and getting a bit more in touch with her center and what she wanted was nice. Sir Myles adopting Alanna was a delightful scene. I also really enjoyed the scenes in Corus towards the end, especially the ones from George's point of view.
The not so good? Man, the plotline with Jonathan is really problematic. I've never liked him as a love interest for Alanna. He can be a great friend, absolutely, but the moment it turns romantic, the relationship just sours for me. I understand he's young and immature, chafing against his responsibility while also learning to handle it responsibly. I can respect some of that. But his complete disregard for Alanna's opinions and desires really wears thin.
And the way it ends kind of spoils Alanna's subsequent rebound to George. I mean, George is so much better for her in a million ways, but the way their relationship progresses feels very underdeveloped and unearned. I think I needed a few more scenes of them falling for each other outside the context of the love triangle with Jonathan. To repeat, I really don't like how Tamora Pierce does romance in these books at all.
I'm also not happy with how ambition is dealt with in this. There are quite a few examples. Alanna being completely unconcerned with Thom just taking her gift is a big problem and really doesn't make sense. Even she, blinded by her love for him as her twin, should have immediately realized that since he's taking it随意 with no warning, he could have taken it while she was in battle and needed it, or while she was using it to keep the Voice of the Bazhir alive. Her lack of follow-up is completely irresponsible and out of character, considering how private and protective she is of herself about everything else.
Lastly, a lot happens in this book, but much of it feels sort of glossed over. I think part of it is that it's very much a setup for Lioness Rampant and was never really meant to be its own standalone story. But I don't know, I just didn't enjoy reading it much this time around.