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I'm truly astonished that I have to rate this book just one star. It's a Tamora Pierce book, for goodness sake! But unfortunately, I found this book to be extremely slow-paced, filled with an abundance of unnecessary details while lacking in the necessary ones. So much of it was just a tiresome ramble about the main character's everyday life. We're told who came to visit her, what they talked about, and so on.
Basically, the entire book focuses on the daily routine and line of duty of "Puppy" Beka Cooper. Don't misunderstand me; I actually liked Beka. She was well-developed, strong yet flawed, which is one of the things I really appreciate about Tamora Pierce's heroines. They're all strong believers in good, but not so overly perfect that they lose their sense of being real people. However, that's where the positives end in this series for me. I couldn't really form a connection with the other characters, and I found the whole plot to be tediously slow and boring.
This book was supposed to be about the mystery of who was stealing and killing the missing children. That sounds really exciting, doesn't it? But it wasn't at all. Somehow, the author managed to take what could have been an interesting mystery and make it dull. Instead of focusing on the mystery, the author chose to concentrate on the mundane aspects of Beka's daily life. I mean, really, who cares who comes to visit her and what time they arrive and what they talk about? And not only that, but I felt that this book, as a whole, was rather light for a story about dealing with criminals. I'm not saying this because I prefer darker books, but because it would have added so much more excitement and atmosphere to the entire book and the world if things had been a bit more gruesome. After all, she is patrolling the rougher parts of the city.
Another point I want to mention is that despite the book's size and length, there is absolutely no world building. I have no idea why this is the case, as there were numerous opportunities to include some world history. But we got practically none. Overall, I would say that this book needs more action and a more exciting, faster pacing. It should keep you on the edge of your seat, not knowing what's around the corner and always in a state of suspense.
This book had so much potential to be thrilling, dark, and full of twists and turns. Even when we finally find out who is killing all the children, it's not that much of a shock. It's just like, "eh, okay then." I had such high hopes for this book, but I was let down mostly by the slow pace and the lack of suspense in the plot and writing. Despite all these negatives, I still want to find out what becomes of Beka. And some people have said that these books get better. I just don't understand why so many people on Goodreads have rated this one so highly.