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As an establishing book for a trilogy, I couldn't help but feel a little short changed by the end. For those who enjoy reading fantasy novels, you may become a little irritated by the protagonist's long list of convenient talents. He is fluent in six (or more?) languages, has amazing eyesight, a philosophical mind, is a painter, a wine appreciator, a military strategist, has a lean, fit body, is a culinary chef, a super swordsman, has impeccable manners (yes, in my world this is a super power), is sexy-as a lady-killer, and is fashionable. Not too bad for a Mountain Boy - particularly as he achieved all the above within seven short years. As much as I liked Talon and believed his oath to his deceased family, I found his "talents" prevented me from immersing myself into the story. He was just a little too perfect. Some of my favourite characters were those who recognised, or were brought down by, their own flaws. It'd send the heart racing as you'd flip page after page to see whether the character got away unscathed. This time, I was unsurprised by Talon's conquests. He's a one-person army. Given any challenge, I'm sure Talon would find a way to rise above. For example, if there's a whipper-snipper problem, no fear, Talon's razor sharp sword and brilliant eyesite will have your paths looking immaculate. If your baby is crying constantly, Talon will use one of his dozen languages to soothe Jnr to slumber. If the ironing is getting out of hand, Talon can press a complete shirt and pant set in under 5 seconds. If you need to impress friends for a get-together at your home, Talon will pose as your roomie, paint an outdoor mural, cook a decadent three-course meal from whatever is in your fridge, guide the group through a wine-tasting course before styling your friends and finishing with a philosophical discussion on warfare. This man could be the new Oprah. I am dearly hopeful the second book will pick up pace and offer a more engaging and believable story.