I rescued this book from the trashpile when my company relocated and discarded an entire bookshelf full of items. I had never read any Franzen before and considered this to be a gratis opportunity to do so.
There were moments when I would start to become engrossed in the story. However, the haphazard nature of the storytelling and the inconsistent writing style constantly left me bewildered and a touch estranged. Toward the conclusion, it improved as the various threads were being woven together, but I didn't truly appreciate how it all culminated. I simply couldn't fathom what Franzen was attempting to convey.
Moreover, I couldn't muster much concern for the characters. They were depicted in a rather broad-brush manner, and the minor details that Franzen included in an effort to make them more relatable seemed so feeble and obvious. For instance, when S. Jammu's name is disclosed and Martin mentally remarks that it seemed so pitiful, as if she believed it was her trump card but it didn't have much significance.
Overall, it was too muddled to be captivating.
Franzen is indeed one of the most highly regarded authors, and justifiably so. However, this initial work, published when he was still in his twenties, shows a writer in the process of refining his skills. The book, which could and should have been significantly shorter than its meandering 517 pages, has descriptive passages that, while often engaging, sometimes drag on. There are also numerous scenes and characters (literally dozens) that seem unnecessary. Classified as dark comedy, I perceive it more as theater of the absurd. After the first quarter of the book, which introduced so many characters that I struggled to distinguish them all, I did appreciate Franzen's development of the three conflicted Probsts (mom, dad, and daughter). However, characters like Singh and the general were more caricatures than realistic portrayals. Additionally, why were so many of the characters evil and unlikable, especially those with dark skin? Franzen's characterizations of Indians and African-Americans seemed to be those of a writer who hadn't spent much time interacting with people of color, and I was put off and somewhat creeped out by his depiction of non-white characters. As a novel about civics, government, business, and everyday American life, it also fell short. When Franzen attempted to make broad statements about St. Louis and America in general, his themes often failed to resonate with me. Is everyone in real life constantly seeking an opportunity to seize power and increase wealth at the expense of others? Franzen's talents (his vivid imagination, his captivating prose) were on display here but in a rather undisciplined manner. Later, as he learned to restrain himself and approach his craft with more subtlety and treat his characters with more empathy, Franzen's writing became some of the most acclaimed in American literature. I don't agree with the critics who considered this an outstanding debut novel. In my opinion, this was a promising yet overall inauspicious first effort.