The Transit of Venus by Shirley Hazzard is a complex and multi-layered novel that weaves together various literary strands. \\n 'You're in my future. A fortune-teller told me.
\\n Hazzard constructs the story with the inexorability of classical tragedy. The opening scene, with its catastrophic storm, sets the stage for something unprecedented. The solitary figure walking into the landscape is reminiscent of the beginning of a Thomas Hardy novel, and indeed, Hardy's tragic vision permeates the book.
However, this is just one aspect of the novel's literary architecture. We also find elements of George Eliot's moral education theme, as in Middlemarch, with its two different sisters set against a larger background. The organising love story, similar to that in Doctor Zhivago, along with Pasternak's sense of fatedness, adds another dimension.
At times, the transit of Venus symbolism can seem a bit laboured, as Hazzard uses it in multiple ways without much subtlety. Nevertheless, the idea of love as an agent of movement and change underpins the story's shape.
The book also gestures towards more modern influences and themes. Woolf's Night and Day, with its concern for two young women in the twentieth century, is prominent, as are the moral imperatives of Henry James. The social background, while never more than wallpaper, serves to signpost the passing of the years.
My engagement with the book never fully cohered, however. The shifting timescale, off-stage big moments, and underdeveloped characters made it hard for me to maintain an emotional connection. There are some lovely scenes and powerful writing towards the end, but I struggled to buy into Caro's sudden realisation of love for Ted Tice and the moral superiority he seems to gain.
What really kept me reading was Hazzard's sparky and textured writing style, which is dense with allusions and requires readers to pay attention. The ending, in particular, demands a detective-like parsing of clues from throughout the book. It is powerful, but perhaps a little manipulative as well.
I found this novel to be extremely irritating. The most significant issue was the author's failure to develop fully-fledged, genuine characters with distinct voices. None of them seemed alive to me, and their dialogue was absurd. (My favorite absurd exchange was when one character asked, 'How was Rome?' and the other replied, 'Baroque.')
Then there is Hazzard's writing style. It is detached, clinical, and impenetrable. There is no heart in this book. It is all so stylized yet senseless:
"The deed of death has no hypothetical existence --or, having its hypothesis in everyone, must be enacted to achieve meaning. Then meaning is total, as for nothing else." This book is full of such passages.
The author clearly has an understanding of human emotions, behavior, and motivations, but she often fails to convey that understanding effectively. And when she does, it is all too brief. Similarly, she does display a few flashes of brilliant, enjoyable prose. The last paragraph, for example, is beautifully written.
The book does improve towards the end, when a plot emerges and some secrets are revealed. And the ending is, of course, tragic - you know from the beginning that this is a dark book. But I didn't care because none of the characters felt real to me. Yes, Hazzard skillfully constructs her novel and is clever with the clues she provides for the attentive reader, but that cleverness is not enough to make me rate this book more highly. Other authors, like James Salter, write about love and marriage, power and betrayal in relationships, and the meaninglessness of it all much better than Hazzard does here. Just too much of the book is filled with incomprehensible descriptions and dialogue.
About two-thirds of the way through, the character Josie exclaims, 'And what in the hell is all that supposed to mean?' Which sums up my feelings exactly.