"One Flew Over the Cuckoo's Nest" is successful, and very much so, because it's concise. It's terse. It conveys precisely what needs to be said. Kesey knows his message and presents it clearly. You get the picture. It has been frequently compared to "A Christmas Carol," and for good reason. However, if "Cuckoo" is Kesey's "Christmas Carol," then "Sometimes a Great Notion" is his "Bleak House." It's verbose, meandering, incoherent, and could easily have shed three hundred pages from its final length without anyone noticing. When your main character doesn't reach the location where all the action is taking place until page 88, and still hasn't retrieved his baggage from the bus terminal eight miles away fifty pages later, you know there's an abundance of extraneous material. And while this makes sense within Kesey's chosen stylistic framework (the story is told by a woman flipping through a photograph album), there's simply too much rambling and insufficient plot progression. It's like being trapped in an entire novel of Melville's two-hundred-page lull in "Moby Dick." If you found that painfully unreadable, "Sometimes a Great Notion" might very well drive you into a frenzy.