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DNF
I managed to reach page 146 out of 358, but unfortunately, I have to put this book down. I am extremely bored.
The overall plot idea is not bad, yet I truly don't enjoy the way it is executed. Generally speaking, it is also difficult for me to follow stories about people I don't care about.
Regarding the style, my main grievance is Kwan's dialogue. She speaks English with a strong accent, which wouldn't be a problem for me to read if her dialogue was presented in the common way in novels (a new paragraph for each speaker, with time for the other character to respond, etc.). However, she goes on long monologues, in her highly stylized way of speaking, about people whose significance I completely fail to understand in the context of this story. It is confusing, dull, and continuous.
*Note: Generally, I don't like reading extensive amounts of highly stylized English. I recall having a similar experience when reading Huckleberry Finn and The Color Purple.
My other complaint about the style is the excessive detail that simply doesn't matter. For instance, I don't need to know every single minor detail of how women work in their daily lives on Thistle Mountain. I don't really care about the minute details of the house that Olivia and her husband purchased, especially when the house doesn't even matter to the big picture of the story. If these details are important, I want to know the reason why.
The second major issue I have is with the other main narrator/character - Olivia. I find her to be very unlikable. She is rude, unfairly judgmental of her family members, and has a strange relationship with her soon-to-be-ex-husband. The constant presence of her partner's deceased ex-girlfriend as a source of stress in their relationship is so peculiar and un-relatable. While that might not necessarily be a deal breaker in fiction, I don't think Tan did a good job of making this setup interesting enough or making Olivia sympathetic enough to keep me engaged.
So, between my dislike for Olivia as a character and my aversion to Kwan's dialogue, not to mention that I still don't understand what Kwan's extremely detailed stories about living in China and encountering English missionaries have to do with Olivia's story, I have completely lost interest in continuing this book.
I managed to reach page 146 out of 358, but unfortunately, I have to put this book down. I am extremely bored.
The overall plot idea is not bad, yet I truly don't enjoy the way it is executed. Generally speaking, it is also difficult for me to follow stories about people I don't care about.
Regarding the style, my main grievance is Kwan's dialogue. She speaks English with a strong accent, which wouldn't be a problem for me to read if her dialogue was presented in the common way in novels (a new paragraph for each speaker, with time for the other character to respond, etc.). However, she goes on long monologues, in her highly stylized way of speaking, about people whose significance I completely fail to understand in the context of this story. It is confusing, dull, and continuous.
*Note: Generally, I don't like reading extensive amounts of highly stylized English. I recall having a similar experience when reading Huckleberry Finn and The Color Purple.
My other complaint about the style is the excessive detail that simply doesn't matter. For instance, I don't need to know every single minor detail of how women work in their daily lives on Thistle Mountain. I don't really care about the minute details of the house that Olivia and her husband purchased, especially when the house doesn't even matter to the big picture of the story. If these details are important, I want to know the reason why.
The second major issue I have is with the other main narrator/character - Olivia. I find her to be very unlikable. She is rude, unfairly judgmental of her family members, and has a strange relationship with her soon-to-be-ex-husband. The constant presence of her partner's deceased ex-girlfriend as a source of stress in their relationship is so peculiar and un-relatable. While that might not necessarily be a deal breaker in fiction, I don't think Tan did a good job of making this setup interesting enough or making Olivia sympathetic enough to keep me engaged.
So, between my dislike for Olivia as a character and my aversion to Kwan's dialogue, not to mention that I still don't understand what Kwan's extremely detailed stories about living in China and encountering English missionaries have to do with Olivia's story, I have completely lost interest in continuing this book.