My biggest gripe with this book is the excessive repetition. It's divided into three sections, and it feels as if Russo wrote each one independently, perhaps with the intention of publishing them as short stories or novellas. Each section repeats the basic facts of Sully's knee injury and his ineffective court appearances, his relationship with Peter and Vera, the incident where Ruth made him visit Big Jim in the nursing home, Miss Beryl's habit of recognizing everyone as a grown-up version of their 8th grade selves, and descriptions of the basic sets like the Horse, Sully's flat, Upper Main, and Hattie's, as well as the characters. Why, for example, do we have to be re-introduced to Wirf, Carl Roebuck, Otis, and Jocko at Hattie's funeral? Additionally, Russo repeatedly illustrates the individual men's fear of women, both their own and others. The final straw for me was the third time I had to read the phrase "wouldn't have said shit if he had a mouthful" to describe Wirf.
I also found the writing to be a bit heavy-handed. Besides the frequent repetition, Russo was very expository in his descriptions. When he sets up the town in the first part, he includes a lengthy history of the two-lane road that existed prior to the Interstate and details the roadside fights and accidents. This wouldn't have been so bad if so many of the characters themselves hadn't already been part of these accidents, like Clive Sr., Sully's brother Patrick, and Clive Jr. in the end.
My last complaint is that Sully goes around introducing Peter to everyone. I understand that Sully wasn't an involved father and that Vera kept him away from Peter for most of the time. But Bath is a small town. It's so small that people hear about the gunshots on Main St. before the cops even arrive. So how is it that no one has ever met Peter and he doesn't know his way around? He's not new to the town. He knows the town; he knows which house was his grandparent's; he knows the people at the diner.
However, there were a few great quotes in the book, as one would expect from Russo. For example, "Where was the middle ground between a sense of adventure and just plain sense? Now there was a human question." And "Somehow old people, once the revered repositories of the culture's history and values, had become dusty museums of arcane and worthless information." Another one is "Who but Carl Roebuck, the little twerp, wouldn't be satisfied with such a woman, Sully wondered as he limped up the driveway of the Roebuck house. Well, most men wouldn't be, he had to admit, because most men were never satisfied." There are also quotes like "These girls knew from experience that their clientele were enthusiastically committed to the buffet concept in direct proportion to their physical inability to negotiate it." And "Which fit in with one of his theories about life, that you missed what you didn't have far more than you appreciated what you did have. It was for this reason he'd always felt that owning things was overrated. All you were doing was alleviating the disappointment of not owning them." Finally, "For fairness and loyalty, however important to the head, were issues that could seldom be squared in the human heart, at the deepest depths of which lay the mystery of affection, of love, which you either felt or you didn't, pure as instinct, which seized you, not the other way around, making a mockery of words like'should' and 'ought'. The human heart, where compromise could not be struck, not ever. Where transgression exacted a terrible price. Where tangled black limbs fell. Where the boom got lowered."
Overall, the book is certainly worth the time. As always, Russo is funny and engaging, and he manages to convey a lot about complex human emotions with his ironic tone.