3.5 stars rounded to 4
This book is truly my favorite up until now. It managed to maintain my interest throughout a significant portion of it by providing a more in-depth exploration of other races and the intricate politics surrounding the Cabal. What impressed me the most was
However, I do have one major criticism. Like Clayton and Cassandra are portrayed as abrasive, arrogant, and selfish individuals, but everyone seems to go to great lengths to gain Clayton's approval simply because he is oh, sooooooo attractive, mysterious, stunning, and perfect and blah blah blah. But Cassandra? Well, she's just a heartless bitch who only cares about herself. Sure, Clayton looks out for his Pact, but Cassandra has also expressed concern for the well-being of vampires over "the cause". I despise this double standard. It's like that whole "boys will be boys" mentality, but as soon as you have an assertive female character - oh no, she's just bossy.
Another concern I have regarding Clayton's character is the possessiveness that is simply brushed off as an overwhelming amount of care, instinct, and love he feels for Elena. As if it's completely healthy and romantic, and something to strive for in a partner. In this particular novel, Elena is having a conversation with Paige in a hotel room, and Elena remarks about how Clayton gets very strange and jealous when it comes to her having friends.
\\n "[Paige]'As for Clay not wanting you to have friends, I know he's like that, and I know why, so you don't need to worry about it... not that I thought he was abusive or anything, but he's, uh, extremely committed-'
[Elena]'Obsessive... I told him about the idea we had, for the ski trip this winter? He flipped. Then I said it'd be the four of us, not just you and me, and he simmered down... that's the trick, I think. Suggest something he'll hate, then offer a less painful alternative.'"\\n
Elena does mention that they are working on him respecting her privacy, but in the real world, if a friend were to tell me how their boyfriend, whom they loved deeply, wanted to isolate them from the community for any reason, I would tell them to leave, cry, and get over that jealous jerk. Not controlling your partner is something you should figure out on your own, love. Just to be clear to anyone who wants to read the Women of the Otherworld series, or any young adult fiction for that matter, POSSESSIVE, CONTROLLING, AND JEALOUS BEHAVIOR IS NOT ROMANTIC OR IDEALISTIC, IT IS say it with me now A B U S I V E. Maybe it's just because I don't like Clay, but I couldn't not mention it. I could list numerous franchises that try to make this behavior acceptable, but it needs to stop.
I think that's why I didn't like Bitten as much, because of him. However, as this series progresses, I am beginning to love it more and more. Armstrong's talent as a novelist is becoming increasingly evident with each book, and I believe she has a genuine gift for world-building. Her research and attention to detail are starting to shine through, and I am completely falling for it. I love Paige so much, and I hope there are more books that feature her as the main character. I also love Lucas's dad - I hope he is included more as well.
When will Paige and Lucas have a baby? They NEED to have a baby.