I really relished in observing Paige's life gradually descend into chaos. Now, don't get me wrong, I'm not a sadist. It's just that the drama was so comical in a strange way. Absolutely nothing seemed to go her way, and everyone appeared to be firmly against her. Then, when you throw a reckless and powerful teenager like Savannah into the mix, the situation only deteriorates further. Savannah was a truly fascinating character. She was naive and audacious, yet despite her past and family ties, she was striving to be good. In fact, she was the main cause of Paige's new and disastrous life. Leah, who was supposedly Savannah's father, desired full custody of his daughter. However, Paige had a hunch that something was amiss with him. And she was spot-on. Leah and his numerous underlings were quite terrifying. With just a single phone call or a flick of a finger, they could inflict real harm. I was on the edge of my seat for most of the time, eagerly anticipating how Paige would manage to prevail against such an evil and powerful adversary.
Watching Paige and Lucas constantly butting heads was rather entertaining. I liked how Lucas simply inserted himself into Paige's life with very little explanation. Their back-and-forth exchanges and constant bickering were uproariously funny. Overall, I found their relationship to be quite adorable.
Armstrong truly went above and beyond when it came to the history and background of magic, witches, and sorcery. I've always found an author's unique take on supernatural elements to be utterly captivating to read. I believe Armstrong did an excellent job with her rich and descriptive writing. Her world-building was flawless and easily understandable. She didn't complicate things unnecessarily. She clearly knew what she was doing.
The Bad
The first half of the book struggled to hold my attention. It took an eternity to get to the real action and supernatural events. I have no interest in reading about ordinary, everyday occurrences. I found it extremely easy to put the book down.
Paige was a somewhat lackluster character. She was naive, rude, and irritating. I didn't really care much about what happened to her. While Savannah might have been a bit of a brat, at least she had the excuse of being only thirteen years old.
The Snuggly
We get one sex scene that focuses more on foreplay than actual intercourse. The romance between Paige and Lucas developed slowly but lacked the passion that I was hoping for.
Overall
If it weren't for Armstrong's amazing first two books, Bitten and Stolen, perhaps I would have had a greater appreciation for this book. However, when compared to them, Dime Store Magic just didn't quite hit the mark. Nevertheless, I can't deny that the book did improve significantly halfway through. It is recommended for those who wish to continue this series and need to be introduced to Savannah in order to understand the rest of the story.
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"Mind if I give you hiccups?" I asked Cortez.
"What?"
"Hiccups. I need to give you a case of hiccups. Is that okay?"
"I can't say I've ever had a girl offer to give me that."