\\n I LOVE and HATE this book!\\n
\\"Surely not?\\" I hear you all ask.
Well, this is the third book in the series. It takes a departure from Elena and the werewolves and zeroes in on the witches - Paige and Savannah. Here's the first hitch. If any of you read my review for Stolen, I had a so-so opinion of Savannah and really disliked Paige. One reason was that Paige came across as overly cocky and arrogant without much justification. Another was that I adored the Pack (the main characters in the earlier books). So, when I began reading this book, I was extremely sceptical and quite negative. The book really had to work hard to win me over, and... it kind of did!
Paige: Surprisingly, I had a decent liking for Paige in this book, for the most part. By getting access to her thoughts, you gain a better understanding of her motives and discover that she isn't as cocky as she seemed in the first book. Moreover, the book attempts to make you sympathize with her from the start. How? Well, they make Savannah more of a handful and less likeable, so Paige appears patient, kind, and selfless in comparison. Additionally, she's almost immediately embroiled in a battle to keep Savannah in her custody. You see her fighting for Savannah against the coven (a group of weak-willed, scared, prejudiced witches), lawyers, a half-demon, and her father. And for the first half, you're on Paige's side, and I was actually rooting for her to win! However, a problem with Paige is that she is very prejudiced. For a character who wants to help everyone and see the best in everyone, she hardly ever gives Lucas/Kristoff a chance to present their cases. She's also very judgmental towards Eve and what she'd done before she died, and this kind of attitude is terrible when raising Eve's daughter!
Savannah: Oh my goodness, what a character! On one hand, Savannah was an absolute brat! She was constantly lying, being selfish, and disrespectful, and I don't know why Paige tolerated it! What's worse, she never gets what's coming to her! For example, in the middle of the book, she wants Paige to perform a special ceremony that her mother would have wanted. Instead of being mature, she screams and is just downright vile to Paige when Paige doesn't want to do it. Another example is when social workers come to check on her well-being, and again, she's extremely vile, screaming curses and insults at the top of her lungs. One more example? How about when she curses the crowd, and when Paige and Lucas confront her about it, she's just as vile (still no real punishment!). And she never learns her lesson. Arguably, the worst thing she does (without any comeuppance or punishment) is closer to the end... However, I still felt a bit sorry for her because she loved her mother so much. As much as Paige was trying, she never understood Eve and what she meant to Savannah. She was very quick to point out Eve's (and Savannah's) faults, and I guess it's no wonder Savannah kept losing her temper (still, there are no excuses for her severe tantrums).
Lucas: While Lucas is rather boring, I like the whole Cabal dynamic, especially the rebel son/favorite son aspect. To me, the highlights were when Paige met Lucas and had to build up trust with him, and anything involving Lucas/Kristof in relation to the cabals.
Kristoff: Wow... I can't believe the book ended like that - I'm so angry!!! (Spoilers for this paragraph.) Kristoff is Savannah's father who has been searching for her for years, especially since Eve died. All he wants is to take care of Savannah, his child, and raise her the best way he can with the best that money can buy. Paige never really gives him the chance to do this. Paige never tells Savannah that her father wants her (blaming it on Leah), and therefore, Savannah is never given the opportunity to even consider that the person after her might have good intentions. Okay, okay, Leah and the lawyer go after Savannah in completely the wrong way after Paige makes it clear that she won't do this through the courts (blood checks being a major issue), and I know Paige didn't know that Kristoff didn't put them up to those stunts. My problem with the setup is that Paige never considers that Kristoff might want Savannah because he loves her (is a nice guy), and this stems from her prejudice towards sorcerors. The reason I keep bringing up this prejudice is the fact that the author wants us to think that Paige is fair, kind, and selfless (aka not prejudiced).
What's worse, when Paige sees Kristoff, she's actually described as being jealous of him rather than worried about Savannah. Yes, I know Paige has looked after Savannah for a while now - but he is her father!!! And, oh my goodness, the scene with the employed witches was so forced (as if they needed to make Kristoff seem evil so that they could turn against him/escape and Paige could keep Savannah). I hated this! For one thing, since you see Kristoff in a few books after this one, the author knew he'd be a character that would stick around. Therefore, she makes Paige and Savannah dislike him even more, even though we, the readers, find out (even in this book) that he wasn't the one who set that up and just wanted Savannah. I just don't get the logic? And the end? Savannah accidentally kills him! That should have been a truly shocking and dramatic moment, especially since Armstrong kept telling us/giving us hints before this that he truly loved Savannah. But the book doesn't dwell on this at all! Savannah just kills him, Paige is slightly upset for her that she killed a person, and then the book just focuses on Paige and Savannah's relationship as if this never happened! (As if we should be in awe of the close bond/special moment the girls are sharing next to a father's dead body). And even worse than this? Savannah never shows any remorse, guilt, or regret for this, and there is no comeuppance or consequence for it at all! While Savannah does confront this moment years and years later, there's so little emotion attached to the scene that it's disgusting.
Wow.
Just wow.
I started this review planning to give this a 3.5/5 because I did like the setup for Lucas and the cabals for later books and it did provide more information about Eve (a character I liked in the second book). I even praised Paige a little for being a better character than I thought she'd be in the first couple of chapters in this book! Then it went down to a 3 due to Leah and Savannah and the way they kept bashing Eve as a character. Then, of course, there's the horrible way they treated Kristoff (one of the main characters in the series!). By having to reread the book, I can't rate it highly. That ending is so vile. If they wanted to establish Paige as the mother/guardian figure who is much better than Eve and Kristoff, there were so many better ways to do this (especially if Eve and Kristoff are also main characters and their actions later on in the series go against Paige's prejudiced thoughts about them!!!)
1/5
Gosh!
I should change the title to
I did love but now mostly HATE this book