The narrator remains an enigma. In Part I, s/he maintains an anonymous presence while sharing with us, the readers, the history and trials of suburbanite Eliot Nailles. ('Our name used to be de Noailles.' p 20) Part II is a written record by the outsider, Paul Hammer (yes, Hammer and Nailles is a purposeful pun), addressed seemingly to that same unnamed, unknown narrator. Part III is concise and to the point, showing us the inevitable intersection of the two men's lives - insider and outsider, conventional and anarchic, self and shadow.
The word'stranger' recurs throughout the story. In one section, the protagonist Nailles is quoted at length as he retells a significant evening with his 17-year-old only child. Father and son visit an abandoned miniature golf course, which serves as a gothic setting for their encounter. The shabby links are a favorite haunt of'men and boys' on summer evenings. (113) Nailles says: "It was windy, as I say, and there was more thunder and it looked like rain and the light on the course was failing so you really couldn't see the faces of the men who played through. They were high school kids, I guess, slum kids, hoods, whatever, wearing tight pants and trick shirts and hair grease. They had spooky voices, they seemed to pitch them in a way that made them sound spooky, and when one of them was addressing the ball another gave him a big goose and he backed right into it, making groaning noises. It isn't that I dislike boys like that really, it's just that they mystify me, they frighten me because I don't know where they come from and I don't know where they're going and if you don't know anything about people it's like a terrible kind of darkness. I'm not afraid of the dark but there are some kinds of human ignorance that frighten me. When I feel this, I've noticed that if I can look into the face of the stranger and get some clue to the kind of person he is I feel better but, as I say, it was getting dark and you couldn't see the faces of any of these strangers as they played through." (116-7)
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