Parts of it gave the impression of being artificial. It was as if Simmons was weary of being overlooked at parties whenever he discussed Shakespeare and Proust, and thus resolved to incorporate those elements into a book. Additionally, it endures comparison to Lord of Light. However, the concept manages to sustain it, and I will definitely read the sequel. The artificiality in certain aspects might have detracted from the overall experience to some extent. But the unique concept that Simmons has presented is captivating enough to draw me in and make me eager to explore what comes next in the story. Despite the challenges it faces in comparison to other works, there is something about this book that keeps me engaged and interested. I am looking forward to seeing how the sequel builds upon the foundation laid in this first installment and whether it can further develop and expand the concept in a more satisfying way.